शब्दों का आवरण ओढ़े
चला वो भेड़िया अपनी चाल
मीठी चाशनी में डूबो शब्दों को
बुना उसने जाल
सोचा ठरक करेगा पूरी
बुन शब्दों का मायाजाल।
सोचा वो शर्मीली सी नासमझ है
आ जाएगी बातों में
बहला फुसला मना के
दिल अपना बहला लूँगा
खेलूँगा कुछ देर
तो कुछ देर दिल बहला लूँगा
शब्दों के मीठे रस समान
कुछ पल तुमको चूसूँगा
थक जाऊँगा, जब बचेगा न कुछ
छोड़ तुमको मैं अपने असली रंग दिखलाऊँगा
नोच खसोट के बदन तुम्हारा
तड़पती रूह छोड़ जाऊँगा।
मीठे शब्दों में विष घोले
उसने तारीफ़ की।
नारी वो ना अबला
ना बेचारी थी
समझ गयी दाँव
पहले ही प्रयास में
विवेक रख समझाया उसने
क्या भला क्या बुरा
मीठे ही शब्दों से उसने निरुत्तर
उसको कर डाला।
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Such an inspirational poem, I loved the ending. 😇✌
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Yup lot of stalkers all around us so just a subtle message to play safe.
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Yess, a good initiative indeed! ☺☺
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Thanks 🙂
Let’s see how many understand.
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I understood the first bit compepltely !!! A man …a ruse ….a predator who sets the trap…
then I am not sure , but I gather the one who was chosen to be victim didn’t take the bait ? Is it right ?
Btw I think this is one of your best …I read and reread and it’s true .
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Yup Pri, he tries all his might with sugar coated words to lure her but she catches him at his first attempt and reverts calmly with a teaching. Thanks a tonne Pri, this appreciation means a lot 🙂
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I struggle with Hindi , but I really enjoyes this read . What is the meaning of the title ? Does it mean Facade ?
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Satyriasis
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https://thatmishmash.wordpress.com/2015/12/13/i-did-it-my-way/
I have had an experience that made this one resonate . Sent you the link. It’s dark in the end though.
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Splendid
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Indeed!
there r lots of people
Who lure the innocence
Of the innocent hearts!
Its good message to keep urslf alert!
Lovely poetry!
I loved the starting rhymes so much!
And a good ending as well
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Yup so very true Jyotee.
Thanks 🙂
I wrote this with a headache and in the end it had become unbearable so finished it abruptly.
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Sunder behtareen
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Shukriya karam meharbani
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Hindi ..gajab….👌👌👌.
Bt wo niche tyming kya likha h…?🤔.
DJ
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Shukriya AM 🙂
Edit kar kar ke un times pe update kar complete ki thi poem maine, apne reference ke liye likha tha.
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Very nice….👏👌
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🙂
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Woah! You’re hindi is terrifically amazing Dheeraj! Great work :))
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Thanks a tonne Antra 🙂
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:))
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🙂
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This poem 😍😍
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Thanks Aanchal 🙂 🙂
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Such a bitter sweet message to everyone out there, wonderful piece Dhiraj
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Thanks a lot Dhwani:)
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Very nice…
The message comveyed truly fits in today’s world
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Thanks a lot for the appreciation More Sir 🙂
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Hmm..don’t call me sir
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Ok More Saab
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Are just call me ravindra…brother
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Ok Ravindra Bhai
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Okk..
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Hi..I have nominated you for Black cat,Blue sea award..please check my blog for the same
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Thanks:)
Will surely check it.
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bahut sundar sabd,,aur unka prayaog,,,kalam ki taqat dikha di,,bahut accha likha hai
fakers get slapped
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Sadar Dhanywaad saraahne ke liye 🙏
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